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That Day - SarryMatts fictionpress-I'm not going to rate this because ti wouldn't be fair. This is definitely amateur writing but the story has some charming spots. Everything is overdone and there are some pretty silly spelling errors but I think it deserves a read.

A wedding planner has to ask his brother's friend (who teased mercilessly while growing up) for a favor, soon finds out his brother's friend really had a crush on him.

The snarky goes a little too far and the situations are contrived but it is worth a few hours. My first thought was the story would have been really good in the hands of a professional writer but it belongs to this person and they wrote it to the best of their ability.

rec'd by The Slash Pile.